Roleplay Tryout ouo

Hope i can get in owo this group seems really strict so i browsed through their stuff for like an hour before finally drawing .__.

I hope this group will be active as it promises, cause the other roleplay groups im in havent been active ^^'

Here we go! Correct me if i've got something wrong :V
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Name: Cal

Gender: Female

Rank: Skywatcher

Tribe: Earth Tribe

Family: N/A

Power: Stage 2

Species: Door Mouse(?)

Appearance: Long haired white calico Japanese Bobtail. Phase 2 tail (Stubby). Medium sized paws good for gripping trees. Claws are always being sharpened while looking out in trees. More on the muscles than your regular she-cat. Two brown paws, one white, one orange-tan. The patches on her head crawl all down to her spine. Orange part outlines the brown and travels down to her hips. Tail markings resemble a raccoon's. Paw pads and tongue same color as her inner ears.

Personality: Ambitious, determined, hard-working, tends to be the "Strong, silent" type when around clanmates and other tribes. Around friends, though, she is outgoing and quite the jokester. Loves her rank and takes pride and joy in it. She absolutely loves high places. As an kit and apperentice, she would always climb hills, dens, and even her clanmates by riding their backs!

History: Born into a litter of one. Caring mother, no father in her life and no sibling, though she did have her denmates. As any other kit, she looked forward to training and becoming a cat that everyone could be proud of. But what she loved most of all was to be in high places. Being a skywatcher was the obvious choice for her. But many doubted her, for she had a stubbed tail. A cat needed a tail to balance his or herself in high places such as trees. She received nothing but pity, and she disliked it. Cats suggested little positions like Guard or a Crafter. They made it sound it was either a she cat's job or an incapable cat's/ She didn't want to be something every other she cat became, be it a queen, a healer, or crafter. She ignored them and pursued her dream of being a skywatcher. Training was challenging of course but she finally graduated. Moons later, her mother came down with greencough and died. Cal grieves for her still. Her father is still unknown.

Family~
Mate: N/A
Kits: N/A
Parents: Mother(dead) Father(unknown)
Siblings: N/A

Role Play Example: A orange,white and brown splotched mouse scurried across the forest floor. Ears pricked at the sound of another rodent. The mouse turned sharply to the left and quietly hid into some bramble bushes, it's side heaving quickly after its run. Finally another mouse, a grayish one, popped out on the other side of the clearing beyond the brambles. Instantly the orange and brown one crawled its way into the clearing with the other one. The gray mouse looked its way, ears flattened but relaxed to see it was another one of its brothers. It went back foraging for food.
The calico mouse stalked around the mouse, away from its eye sight. It tensed as its size started to increase. Round ears turned into large perked ones, naked tail turning into a short stubbed fluffy tail, front bucked teeth separated into two top canines, short legs turned long, and short furred poofed out. The transformed cat let out a yowl before clamping its jaws around the unsuspecting gray mouse's throat, instantly killing it.
The bob tailed cat lifted her head,mouse dangling from her mouth eyes gleaming with triumph. It turned and climbed the nearest tree. She had been late to duty, unable to take a meal from the fresh kill pile. On her way, she decided, she would pick up a quick snack.
The feline rested on a high branch that overlooked the east side of the territory. She could see several of her other tribemates, keeping duty with her. She quickly lashd her small tail harshly, fighting to keep balance. She finally settled down and dipped her head to take the bite of the mouse.
"Another day of Sky Watching for Cal," the cat murmured happily to herself.
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DONE. tell me if i need to fix anything ;w;